I mean the way you tell the story.
What I would really like is
1. I am a good guy
2. My personality is brave, but in the kind of way where I really don't want to do something (because of fear) , but I force myself to anyway.
3. Could I get an assurance that you will try to write about everyone equally? It doesn't have to be exact, but I know everyone would enjoy being a larger (than just a cameo appearance) part of the story.