The Silencing of Springs - Discussion Thread

Bella_Brassclock 2019-09-03 14:53:49 UTC #3

How did you like Chapter 3 - The Human Servant Girl?

That was AWESOME! I wasn't in it, but great job nonetheless.
That was AWESOME! You did a great job representing my character.
That was good, but I think you should have made my character a bit different. [Explain in reply below]
You made my character good, but I don't really like that chapter much.
I have a suggestion! [Explain in reply below]
That was okay, but it could have been better.
I don't like that one as much, sorry.

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Bella_Brassclock 2019-09-05 01:20:22 UTC #4

Good evening, folks! How did you like Chapter 4 - Tainted Fog?

That was AWESOME! I wasn't in it, but great job nonetheless.
That was AWESOME! You did a great job representing my character.
That was good, but I think you should have made my character a bit different. [Explain in reply below]
You made my character good, but I don't really like that chapter much.
I have a suggestion! [Explain in reply below]
That was okay, but it could have been better.
I don't like that one as much, sorry.

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Kimkate_Burnclock 2019-09-06 00:04:30 UTC #5

That was an amazing chapter! You're descriptions were wonderful!

Nola_Applequill1 2019-09-06 02:00:16 UTC #6

Thank you so epically much!!!

Bella_Brassclock 2019-09-06 02:19:24 UTC #8

Came out quite quickly, didn't it? That's always a good thing. Did you enjoy Chapter 5 - The Writing Pad?

That was AWESOME! I wasn't in it, but great job nonetheless.
That was AWESOME! You did a great job representing my character.
That was good, but I think you should have made my character a bit different. [Explain in reply below]
You made my character good, but I don't really like that chapter much.
I have a suggestion! [Explain in reply below]
That was okay, but it could have been better.
I don't like that one as much, sorry.

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Bella_Brassclock 2019-09-07 04:39:43 UTC #9

Greetings, ladies and gents! How did you like Chapter 6 - Imperfect?

That was AWESOME! I wasn't in it, but great job nonetheless.
That was AWESOME! You did a great job representing my character.
That was good, but I think you should have made my character a bit different. [Explain in reply below]
You made my character good, but I don't really like that chapter much.
I have a suggestion! [Explain in reply below]
That was okay, but it could have been better.
I don't like that one as much, sorry.

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Nola_Applequill1 2019-09-07 04:47:08 UTC #11

No offense, self, but meh. XD 'Twas okay, but it could have been better... Does anyone else know what I mean?

Peregrine_Appleclock 2019-09-07 04:54:19 UTC #12

Ha ha, very funny.

I'm enjoying the story so far! Will there be other characters in the future?

Nola_Applequill1 2019-09-07 14:36:47 UTC #13

I'm not trying to joke. I'm serious.

@Miss_K could probably answer that question better.

Peregrine_Appleclock 2019-09-07 14:44:46 UTC #14

Sorry, thought you were referencing the title, "Imperfect."

Nola_Applequill1 2019-09-07 14:45:17 UTC #15

LOLOL! I didn't think of that. Good catch! XD

Kimkate_Burnclock 2019-09-07 20:53:24 UTC #16

Well, yes and no. As Samantha and Bella grow up, you'll meet many odd strangers and familiar faces. Few are as they say, fewer as they seem. Old things known as new things shown are mist-like as a dream.

I completely understand. I say that to nearly every post I make.

Nola_Applequill1 2019-09-07 22:45:52 UTC #17

Woah... @Miss_K, that was amazing.

Kimkate_Burnclock 2019-09-07 22:52:16 UTC #18

It was? Well, thank you very much then!

Nola_Applequill1 2019-09-07 22:54:17 UTC #19

Yes! It was awesome! I loved it.

Kimkate_Burnclock 2019-09-07 22:57:02 UTC #20

That's reassuring. Bella's awkward speech is, I believe, a key part in her and Samantha's friendship. On the outside, the two girls don't seem to have much in common. However, they have a bonding struggle. Therefore, they have a reason to stick together other than simply wanting to be friends. I'm so glad you made that part of Bella's personality.

Nola_Applequill1 2019-09-07 22:58:50 UTC #21

I absolutely agree. *dances a merry jig *

I'll be working on the next chapter shortly!

Kimkate_Burnclock 2019-09-07 23:00:10 UTC #22

Wonderful! I'll be watching game plays of Legend of Zelda: Skyward Sword (Lila's been at me since I got home about to watch it)

I'm looking forward to it!

Other games people play! (AETHERLIGHT MY FAVORITE ALWAYS! :) )

Nola_Applequill1 2019-09-07 23:01:18 UTC #23

Haha, coolio!

Bella_Brassclock 2019-09-11 00:32:44 UTC #24

Greetings once again, ladies and gents! How did you like Chapter 7 - A Bonding Struggle?

That was AWESOME! I wasn't in it, but great job nonetheless.
That was AWESOME! You did a great job representing my character.
That was good, but I think you should have made my character a bit different. [Explain in reply below]
You made my character good, but I don't really like that chapter much.
I have a suggestion! [Explain in reply below]
That was okay, but it could have been better.
I don't like that one as much, sorry.

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And how did you like Chapter 8 - United We Stand?

That was AWESOME! I wasn't in it, but great job nonetheless.
That was AWESOME! You did a great job representing my character.
That was good, but I think you should have made my character a bit different. [Explain in reply below]
You made my character good, but I don't really like that chapter much.
I have a suggestion! [Explain in reply below]
That was okay, but it could have been better.
I don't like that one as much, sorry.

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