The Silencing of Springs - Discussion Thread

Silence_Burnlance 2019-09-22 20:22:23 UTC #34

The second half of Chapter Eleven... was not supposed to be as long as it was...

Kimkate_Burnclock 2019-09-22 20:25:06 UTC #35

I did my best to describe Dashing Daywear Though I might have gone a bit overboard...

Nola_Applequill1 2019-09-22 22:28:42 UTC #36

I don't mind at all! That was such a beautiful chapter! I love the story being told by the alley kids, too. Amazingly done!

Bella_Brassclock 2019-09-22 23:36:31 UTC #37

Wow, this one was quite quick! Alright, ladies and gents, how did you like Chapter 11, Part 2 - Whispers in the Alley?

That was AWESOME! I wasn't in it, but great job nonetheless.
That was AWESOME! You did a great job representing my character.
That was good, but I think you should have made my character a bit different. [Explain in reply below]
You made my character good, but I don't really like that chapter much.
I have a suggestion! [Explain in reply below]
That was okay, but it could have been better.
I don't like that one as much, sorry.

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Kimkate_Burnclock 2019-09-23 01:13:34 UTC #38

Well, it was being told by an adult too alley kids. However, thank you all the same!

Nola_Applequill1 2019-09-23 14:38:57 UTC #39

Ah. Where in the story does it say that? Did I miss that when I was reading?

Kimkate_Burnclock 2019-09-23 18:38:09 UTC #40

Here, I'll quote for you :

Nola_Applequill1 2019-09-23 18:38:48 UTC #41

Ah, okay! Thanks!

But wasn't the man talking about Eddie? Or is he referring to himself in third person...?

Kimkate_Burnclock 2019-09-23 18:51:44 UTC #42

He was referring to himself in third person

Nola_Applequill1 2019-09-23 18:52:08 UTC #43

Ah, makes sense. I'll continue working on Chapter 12 sometime today!

Kimkate_Burnclock 2019-09-23 18:52:46 UTC #44

Wonderful! Do you have time to stick around while I write stuff for a bit?

Nola_Applequill1 2019-09-23 18:53:39 UTC #45

Yeah, of course! You mean to talk or CharChat, or...?

The Rockwood Project Character Lounge! (And Just Any of Stan's Characters.)

Bella_Brassclock 2019-10-02 01:28:34 UTC #46

Apologies for the delay! So how, might I ask, did you enjoy Chapter 12, Part 1 - Winding Roads?

That was AWESOME! I wasn't in it, but great job nonetheless.
That was AWESOME! You did a great job representing my character.
That was good, but I think you should have made my character a bit different. [Explain in reply below]
You made my character good, but I don't really like that chapter much.
I have a suggestion! [Explain in reply below]
That was okay, but it could have been better.
I don't like that one as much, sorry.

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Eerie_Coppernight 2019-10-02 01:50:31 UTC #47

I've been following this story, and I must say I'm quite impressed.

Nola_Applequill1 2019-10-02 01:51:34 UTC #48

Thank you very much, Eerie!

Bella_Brassclock 2019-10-03 01:09:43 UTC #49

Why thank you, ma'am! *tips hat with a grin*

Bella_Brassclock 2019-10-03 01:17:18 UTC #50

And now for Chapter 12, Part 2 - Hope at Last?

That was AWESOME! I wasn't in it, but great job nonetheless.
That was AWESOME! You did a great job representing my character.
That was good, but I think you should have made my character a bit different. [Explain in reply below]
You made my character good, but I don't really like that chapter much.
I have a suggestion! [Explain in reply below]
That was okay, but it could have been better.
I don't like that one as much, sorry.

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Kimkate_Burnclock 2019-10-05 20:41:15 UTC #51

Well done on Chapter twelve! However:

For future reference, Samantha likes the dark and isn't very social

Nola_Applequill1 2019-10-07 15:27:09 UTC #52

I know that she isn't social; my reason for saying that was because then no one was around so Bella/Samantha couldn't ask for directions.

Bella_Brassclock 2019-10-09 01:59:51 UTC #53

Greetings, ladies and gents! What were your thoughts on Chapter 13 - An Unexplained Pursuit?

That was AWESOME! I wasn't in it, but great job nonetheless.
That was AWESOME! You did a great job representing my character.
That was good, but I think you should have made my character a bit different. [Explain in reply below]
You made my character good, but I don't really like that chapter much.
I have a suggestion! [Explain in reply below]
That was okay, but it could have been better.
I don't like that one as much, sorry.

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