The Silencing of Springs - Discussion Thread

[Bella_Brassclock]

The Silencing of Springs - Discussion Thread

Greetings, ladies and gents! This is Bella Brassclock and @Silence_Burnlance here - and today, we present you with our new duo role play, The Silencing of Springs.

This role play is, of course, sponsored by @Miss_K and @Nola_Applequill1. It will delve deeper into the stories of our characters.

Please feel free to leave your comments, thoughts and suggestions here in the discussion thread. I bid you all adieu, and we bid you good Aether on the adventure of a lifetime.

- Bella Brassclock and Silence Burnlance

[Bella_Brassclock]

How did you like Chapter 1 - Silence Burnlance?

• That was AWESOME! I wasn't in it, but great job nonetheless.
• That was AWESOME! You did a great job representing my character.
• That was good, but I think you should have made my character a bit different. [Explain in reply below]
• You made my character good, but I don't really like that chapter much.
• I have a suggestion! [Explain in reply below]
• That was okay, but it could have been better.
• I don't like that one as much, sorry.

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And how did you like Chapter 2 - Bella Brassclock?

• That was AWESOME! I wasn't in it, but great job nonetheless.
• That was AWESOME! You did a great job representing my character.
• That was good, but I think you should have made my character a bit different. [Explain in reply below]
• You made my character good, but I don't really like that chapter much.
• I have a suggestion! [Explain in reply below]
• That was okay, but it could have been better.
• I don't like that one as much, sorry.

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[Bella_Brassclock]

The Silencing of Springs

How did you like Chapter 3 - The Human Servant Girl?

• That was AWESOME! I wasn't in it, but great job nonetheless.
• That was AWESOME! You did a great job representing my character.
• That was good, but I think you should have made my character a bit different. [Explain in reply below]
• You made my character good, but I don't really like that chapter much.
• I have a suggestion! [Explain in reply below]
• That was okay, but it could have been better.
• I don't like that one as much, sorry.

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[Bella_Brassclock]

The Silencing of Springs

Good evening, folks! How did you like Chapter 4 - Tainted Fog?

• That was AWESOME! I wasn't in it, but great job nonetheless.
• That was AWESOME! You did a great job representing my character.
• That was good, but I think you should have made my character a bit different. [Explain in reply below]
• You made my character good, but I don't really like that chapter much.
• I have a suggestion! [Explain in reply below]
• That was okay, but it could have been better.
• I don't like that one as much, sorry.

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[Kimkate_Burnclock]

That was an amazing chapter! You're descriptions were wonderful!

[Nola_Applequill1]

Thank you so epically much!!!

[Bella_Brassclock]

The Silencing of Springs

Came out quite quickly, didn't it? That's always a good thing. Did you enjoy Chapter 5 - The Writing Pad?

• That was AWESOME! I wasn't in it, but great job nonetheless.
• That was AWESOME! You did a great job representing my character.
• That was good, but I think you should have made my character a bit different. [Explain in reply below]
• You made my character good, but I don't really like that chapter much.
• I have a suggestion! [Explain in reply below]
• That was okay, but it could have been better.
• I don't like that one as much, sorry.

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[Bella_Brassclock]

The Silencing of Springs

Greetings, ladies and gents! How did you like Chapter 6 - Imperfect?

• That was AWESOME! I wasn't in it, but great job nonetheless.
• That was AWESOME! You did a great job representing my character.
• That was good, but I think you should have made my character a bit different. [Explain in reply below]
• You made my character good, but I don't really like that chapter much.
• I have a suggestion! [Explain in reply below]
• That was okay, but it could have been better.
• I don't like that one as much, sorry.

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[Nola_Applequill1]

No offense, self, but meh. XD 'Twas okay, but it could have been better... Does anyone else know what I mean?

[Peregrine_Appleclock]

Ha ha, very funny.

I'm enjoying the story so far! Will there be other characters in the future?

[Nola_Applequill1]

Ha ha, very funny.

I'm not trying to joke. I'm serious.

I'm enjoying the story so far! Will there be other characters in the future?

@Miss_K could probably answer that question better.

[Peregrine_Appleclock]

I'm not trying to joke. I'm serious.

Sorry, thought you were referencing the title, "Imperfect."

[Nola_Applequill1]

LOLOL! I didn't think of that. Good catch! XD

[Kimkate_Burnclock]

@Miss_K could probably answer that question better.

Well, yes and no. As Samantha and Bella grow up, you'll meet many odd strangers and familiar faces. Few are as they say, fewer as they seem. Old things known as new things shown are mist-like as a dream.

'Twas okay, but it could have been better... Does anyone else know what I mean?

I completely understand. I say that to nearly every post I make.

[Nola_Applequill1]

Woah... @Miss_K, that was amazing.

[Kimkate_Burnclock]

It was? Well, thank you very much then!

[Nola_Applequill1]

Yes! It was awesome! I loved it.

[Kimkate_Burnclock]

That's reassuring. Bella's awkward speech is, I believe, a key part in her and Samantha's friendship. On the outside, the two girls don't seem to have much in common. However, they have a bonding struggle. Therefore, they have a reason to stick together other than simply wanting to be friends. I'm so glad you made that part of Bella's personality.

[Nola_Applequill1]

I absolutely agree. *dances a merry jig *

I'll be working on the next chapter shortly!

[Kimkate_Burnclock]

Wonderful! I'll be watching game plays of Legend of Zelda: Skyward Sword (Lila's been at me since I got home about to watch it)

I'm looking forward to it!