Aw man. All of you guys are nuts. I'll explain in a minute.
Thank you very much for the constructive criticism! I understand completely. The only thing I can say, I haven't really done much written work in stories and in school all together. It seems like I missed out. I'm trying to get better at it, and this role-play and you all liking it really means a lot to me.
I think the really cool thing is, (I just got my test results) my speech test got the highest grade out of everything. (It's my all time highest.) Even though I make tons of mistake, this RP has really helped me in a lot of ways.
But thank you so much for taking the time to read it. I will check out that link. (Could you tell me which mistakes were the worst in this part?)
Thank you much.
Or did you...?
Thanks so much.
So stay tuned for the next episode.