Here I will update how my current roleplay is coming along (it hasn't been published yet), and, in turn, where we can discuss and comment on them in the future.
Have a nice day!
~~ Peregrine Appleclock
Real quick, I want to assess something:
Who wants to be in my roleplay??
Votes are public.
What kind of role play is this @Peregrine_Appleclock? Is it a free role play, or a story role play? Either way, I'd love to be in it!
For now it's going to be just me posting stuff. (Is that what a story roleplay is?) It's my backstory.
Yeppers! Awesome, I'd love to be in it. Providing my character information below:
Hope this helps!
Hiya! I'm here to just plain talk about whatever. What's you favorite color, author, and hobby?
Hi, @Missy_Vonheart!!Let's see... My favorite color is definitely green, but I also like fiery colors. My favorite author is Andrew Peterson (WINGFEATHER SAGA!!!!), and my favorite hobby is listening to movie and video game soundtracks.
I love it! Great job, Peri!
Awesome!!!! You have a real knack for description. I like your writing voice, especially in this POV.
This is my favorite part.
AAAAAAAGH PIP AMAZING!!!!!!
You are so good. SO VERY GOOD. Please write the next part soon PLLLLLLLEEEEEEEEEEAAAAAAAAAAZZZZZZZEEEEEE.
oh me lawds, that was beautiful
Yes! I totally echo what @Zoe_Amberedge said!
GAH!! you guys are SO very encouraging!!
@Nola_Applequill1 Thankee very much!! bows
@Ariella_Newheart Wow, thanks! A fair warning: Not all of my roleplays will be quite as good as this one.
@Aislinn_Mollisong1 Ohhh, Ace! tight hug Thank you so much! I'll see what I can do... glances coldly at enormous pile of schoolwork
@Zoe_Amberedge @Missy_Vonheart Thank you SO much!!!
Hmmm, I need y'alls opinion on the Installment Two of The Appleclock Saga. I don't think it was very good. The character development was too... sudden... SO! Feedback, writerly advice, praises, critiques, ANYTHING would be nice! And please be honest!
No, it was great! I feel like you did a great job describing her emotions without it being an info dump!
I just think there was too much feeling and not enough action...
I think it was a good way to introduce her, but that’s just my personal opinion.
Heya, Peri! I want to say that I personally like it when someone expresses his/her feelings for a little chunk of the story, not always just action.
Like Iliara (am I eligible to call you Elm? ) said,
Great work, @Peregrine_Appleclock!