Here's mine!
Freddy Direladen1cleaning up trash and fightingThe Big Forest {I forgot the name}The Resistances Cleaning and patrol
Sneak peeks at Episode 5... not trying to give it away... T-T
@Cinnar_Ratchetloop Just a small warning...
Other than that, you're doing great so far!
Haha, it's not what you think. No killing here!
Ahem...certain people were worried about certain parts in an earlier draft of Episode 5 of Origins that had to do with... blood not just killing. I would advise caution when dealing with anything of that sort.
@Xonos_Darkgrate1 could explain more...
The mention of blood around a machete and the threat of execution is way too much.As is, I'll have to remove that first snippet you put up mentioning it.
That part specifically is way too violent for a younger audience which these forums are open and directed towards.
That's fine. It wouldn't affect the plot or anything, so... XD
Guys? I'm not sure if I'll actually continue working on this story...
I've been busy, as you can tell, and I need to rest my eyes. really. @Goku_Ironheart, thank you. You've given me an excuse now XD
I get everything that has just happen here...except I think it was much, MUCH worse for me in my opinion.......
Maybe it's because I stayed to argue? Anyways, nice job handling it so well, @Cinnar_Ratchetloop.
What! You stayed to argue! Let me see...
Oookay, you did. Yeah, in my opinion, you had it worse...
I wasn't going to let me original story DIE like that...but I guess the "people" got what they wanted in the end.Or person... Whatever, sorry, I'll get back on topic now. @Cinnar_Ratchetloop
Ha, it's okay... it all sounds... interesting? I DUD have to say something though... maybe in Random Anything.
My brothers and I are playing Aetherlight right now till 2:30 ok!!!!!!
@Xonos_Darkgrate1 I have apologize for that I never wanted someone's story to change but if it has well questionable content it needs changed
I'm officially starting it again. From scratch.I mean, Episode 5.
sneak peak
I know you probably won't see this but GREAT JOB!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!