Dear Mr. Warfalcon A.K.A. @Siege_Throttlequill,
May I ask if your apostrophe key is broken? Because you keep using a different -- but similar -- key for your apostrophes. Unfortunately, due to the command codes on this forums, the character you've been substituting for the apostrophe causes a strange format like this:
This means that not only is your formatting is weird, it also means the apostrophe substitutes disappear.
I literally had to go through your whole story replacing the apostrophes!
By the way, your story is really good! I enjoy your descriptive style. Please continue to write more!
Your faithful moderator,