Wow, @Miss_M! This was actually pretty good!
Unlike most other role-plays, I took some time to read through this edition.
And I have to say, I really love that storybook feeling in your writing. It literally makes me feel like I'm reading a book to my kids. (As if I was old enough to have one haha... ) but that just means that it really reminds of when my mom would read Narnia to me or let me read it to her. Again, it was great! Not quite awesome, but great!
(In fact, maybe I'll post a role-play review about it... )