Non-Automated Autagtrophe Review/Discussion (Alpacas Excluded)

[Aislinn_Mollisong1]

@Miss_S PLEASE WRITE MORE!!!!! It's been foreeeeeevvvvvveeeeerrrr since the last one!

[Sierepica_Fuzzywalker]

Alright, my muse has returned from the grave...wait, that was unfortunately literal...

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This is the chapter that unfortunately needed to be, but it is slightly out-of-date. My apologies to @Xonos_Darkgrate1 for how dark his character has temporarily gotten. Same for @Matt_Bonnetfolly1 & @Silverclaw_Bonnetfolly1 ...I think.

The next chapter will see the return of @Awesome_Lensfun1, @Iliara_Mustardtop, and @Pig_Larkcape1, at least. This should put us on a more return to comedic form.

AND NOW FOR THE QUESTION:
Should Miss_S's name be revealed in story?

• Yes, I think her name should be revealed
• No, for the purposes of this story, Miss_S sounds cool

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[Aislinn_Mollisong1]

Miss S. PLEASE put me in your magnificent story soon.

I BEG OF YOU

[Iliara_Mustardtop]

GREAT ADDITION.
How? How? I just love it. Great characterization.

[Gloria_Oldenpinner]

Yay! A new addition! That was great, @Sierepica_Fuzzywalker!

[Kelli_Oldenline]

What! Alpacas are excluded from this discussion? That discriminates against alpacas!

triggered

JK, I love the role-play! The contrast of the humorous alpacas and the dark state of Kerian makes this sooooooo perfect.

I'd like to be included in the role-play, but only when you have time.

Name: Kelli Oldenline
Weapon: Shearing Crook
Vehicle: Whatever goes the fastest
Hated Vehicle: Waterskis
Fruit: Lemon Slices

Deathtoumbrellas

[Sierepica_Fuzzywalker]

You know that you're late on your role-play when the forum itself questions whether you should revive the topic. But I defy the 227 days of stillness to present:

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I still dislike PvP action sequences. Fortunately, this chapter should mark the end of those for a few chapters, at least. Also, this marks my best attempt to handle @Awesome_Lensfun1's vision for his neutral character, which may elicit some complaints. I tried, guys.

Also we get to see @May_Otterview back in the action again, ironically too. It's been so long I'm kinda worried that the biggest joke of this chapter will be lost on you all. But I won't spoil it just in case.

Everyone else is back except @Xonos_Darkgrate1, @Gloria_Oldenpinner, and @Kieran_Candleview1, since his story is on pause for this one. You all will be back in Chapter 8, which is looking to be much funnier than this one. I still feel like I'm off my humor rockers though, so I may decide to introduce a couple more of these profiles waiting for me. But anyway, I'll see how it goes (or doesn't).

[Awesome_Lensfun1]

It’s fine. Even though I may disagree with the plot line and so, I just have to remember that this is not my roleplay. That’s mostly why I chose my character to be an automoton, so that it wouldn’t have to be my actual roleplay person. So changes are fine, and I think you did well.

[Iliara_Mustardtop]

YESSSSSSSSS!! I really really like it!! (I keep badgering my sis to read this one )
Also...I don’t think I got the joke, unfortunately...probably cause I’m reading this on a sleepy Saturday morning. So hopefully someone else has a sharper brain than I
It’s been a really long time since I added to my roleplay...I understand completely....

[Ariella_Newheart]

Nice work, @Sierepica_Fuzzywalker! I'm glad you defied those days of stillness. Can't wait to see what happens next. (And does this mean I can understand alpacas?)

[Sierepica_Fuzzywalker]

Not extensively. There is something important that affects that, heh, that even affects Miss_S/Sieriepica Fuzzywalker (hint: it involves Aether...).

But I will save the rest of that for Chapter 8, which should provide another hint to that small mystery, if not reveal it outright. Should be pretty obvious.

[Sierepica_Fuzzywalker]

And, with an unfortunate slight delay due to the fact that my home internet died...

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Apologies to @Xonos_Darkgrate1 for having to delay his appearance for another chapter. Also, next chapter I will be putting @Aislinn_Mollisong1's character into the story! (That will definitely happen. Also, Xonos has to be back next chapter, so he will be. )

I like this chapter better than that last one. Much better jokes, and the ending to it...why do you think I was using a codename this whole time?

Enjoy!

[Iliara_Mustardtop]

screams aloud
YESSSSSSSSSS
So good. Aether-tastic. Awesome chapter!!!
And finally....some backstory!

[Ariella_Newheart]

Yayyy a new section!

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shattered the windshield

I don't think May would have been too happy about that.

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Madamosielle, however, was not inclined to hear anything about what May Otterview had in mind - she had stopped listening at "Miss_S got captured." "Ratgur," she said in her serious business voice, "you get us to Lucky's Castle right now."

Ratgur looked confused.

"You heard her," Madamosielle snapped at Ratgur, gesturing toward Ariella. "Now."

I love these alpacas.

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I'm going to have to rethink this Aether treatment, Shadowfire thought to herself. It's making me go crazy.

OOOOooooh, I think I understand now...

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The fur, once colorful, turn to a sickly white. The bright eyes of intelligence grow dull. And the only comment from your best friend "You see, they are more docile that way. And the fur is much more practical - it can be dyed in thousands of different colors. Do you not see the opportunity? The possibilities?"

Awww...

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To Miss_S's credit, her response to that comment was to punch him in the face. Actually, that might have been too much. It's probably why he flooded the Evergreen Meadows - revenge. "Your loyalty is to those dumb beasts," he told her.

Who does this dude think he is?

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But of course, evil has no respect. "Sierepica Fuzzywalker" boomed an admittedly friendly voice from up ahead. "I am so glad to see you again."

Uh-oh, NOT GOOD!

[Sierepica_Fuzzywalker]

School starts for me today. But before I get too involved and possibly sucked away for the next 227 days, I present:

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As promised, @Aislinn_Mollisong1 makes an appearance, and obligatory appearance of @Xonos_Darkgrate1 and @Pig_Larkcape1's respective characters.

(Also, if anyone was worried about the Barron, he just got burned, which makes it hard to talk. He'll be okay.)

[Peregrine_Appleclock]

That was. . . EPIC. -is fangirling-

[Iliara_Mustardtop]

The awesomeness! The agony! THE SUSPENSE!!!
Brilliant as always, SierEPICa.

[Sierepica_Fuzzywalker]

Only 207 days this time between chapters. I'm slipping up.

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This chapter features @Aislinn_Mollisong1 primarily; other non-alpaca characters make brief appearances.

Next chapter will probably be a tricky one for me to write. I know where this is going, but getting there may be interesting indeed. Also, I may actually be able to incorporate the last two profiles into the story.

Goodness Darkgrate. I knew you would end up there, but I had no idea it would be like this...SUSPENSE.

[Sierepica_Fuzzywalker]

As with all endings, I am sure to have disappointed everybody.

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As promised, @Scarlett_Darkhall akes an appearance.

After much deliberation, I decided to go with the original plan for the role-play, which I never really deviated from. I did think some of the side threads with the other characters were a little unfinished - for example, I did think that I had more to write for @Shadowfire_Fanglecraft than I did - but I had no space to tie that into the main story, and the main story is complete. There was also no need to drag this one into the future like a cog-loosing auto-goat.

Thanks to all of the folks who read and enjoyed this one, and to all who volunteered themselves as characters. But they are probably all gone now...at least, I hope they are gone so I don't have to read too many complaints from dissatisfied former characters.

Goodbye, old friends, and I hope to see you again someday.

[Iliara_Mustardtop]

AY-YI-YI she returns!!
That was an excellent ending, even if like you said, it didn't wrap up every thread.