Nola A.: Case Unsolved (Discussion Thread!)

[Nola_Applequill1]

is dying a slow tortured death

Save me.... saaavvvvvvvvvvvvve meeeeeee........ I need moooooorrrrrrrre.....

AH! Okay. *saves * Now. Look for a chapter coming soon.

[Nola_Applequill1]

SFDP

New chapter coming very soon. Time's fun when you're having flies... Wait, is it the other way around?

[Nola_Applequill1]

Nola A.: Case Unsolved

Chapter 16, The Fawn is Loose is now published! What do you think, people?

• That was AWESOME! I wasn't in it, but great job nonetheless.
• That was AWESOME! You did a great job representing my character.
• That was good, but I think you should have made my character a bit different. [Explain in reply below]
• You made my character good, but I don't really like that chapter much.
• I have a suggestion! [Explain in reply below]
• That was okay, but it could have been better.
• I don't like that one as much, sorry.

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People Who Were Mentioned in Chapter 16, The Fawn is Loose:

In order of appearance:

@May_Otterview - Prologue

@Lightscape_Ironwalker - Prologue

@Jaden_The_Imperial_Guy - Prologue

@Arrethtraen_Sprocketline

@Gloria_Oldenpinner

@Scarlett_Darkhall

Let me know what you guys think!

[Grace_Newgadget]

That was awesome!!! I can’t wait to see what happens next!!

[Arrethtraen_Sprocketline]

Nola A.: Case Unsolved

Miss Sprocketline

Fun fact: Arre doesn't go by Sprocketline. But I'm glad that you called her that, just the same.

YOU DID AN AMAZING JOB AT MAKING FAWN AMAZING. Seriously, this was THE BEST ONE YET.
-throws a floodle at Fawn-

[Scarlett_Darkhall]

Nola A.: Case Unsolved

Darkhall also reached for her Flintlock Pistols. Heh. Same pistols as me. I suppose we both have similar weapon tastes?

Haha! Indeed, my friend!

I love this chapter!!!

[Emily_Purplebottle]

Everything is awsome!

Sorry...I watched the Lego Movie recently...

Come out with the next episode very soon.

Walks into shadows

Trips

[Nola_Applequill1]

Fun fact: Arre doesn't go by Sprocketline. But I'm glad that you called her that, just the same.

Ooooohhhh.

YOU DID AN AMAZING JOB AT MAKING FAWN AMAZING. Seriously, this was THE BEST ONE YET. -throws a floodle at Fawn-

*smirks * I stole your look, didn't I? *raises eyebrow * There, that's better.

Anyhoooooo, thank you so much! Glad to hear.

Haha! Indeed, my friend!

Hehe!

I love this chapter!!!

Thank you so much!

Everything is awsome!

Thank you so much!

Sorry...I watched the Lego Movie recently...

Haha, yeah, I listened to that song and it was... Well... Erm... Awesome.

Come out with the next episode very soon.

Walks into shadows

Trips

Careful! *snickers *

[Lightscape_Ironwalker]

Great job!

[Pig_Larkcape1]

Excellent work on Chapter 16. I am quite enjoying this series. And yes, I have been watching from the shadows...

For Nola Applequill

Could you maybe put me in it?

[Nola_Applequill1]

Excellent work on Chapter 16.

Thank you so much! Great to hear.

I am quite enjoying this series.

You have? Well, thank you, sir!

And yes, I have been watching from the shadows...

Heheheh... I know how that can be.

Could you maybe put me in it?

Why, certainly! I know you are a part of Agent Lightspark: Revealed with @Sierra_Lightspark, which will all be, hehe, revealed soon. But if you're looking for a story that is updated much more frequently, it's this one. Did you want to be good or bad in this story?

[Pig_Larkcape1]

you want to be good or bad in this story?

Hmm.
I think I'll be the BAD GUY.

[Nola_Applequill1]

Hmm. I think I'll be the BAD GUY.

Hehe. Cool. Is it okay if I make you a Xare? They're still technically bad guys.

And @Peregrine_Appleclock, you'll be in there soon enough. In case you were wondering.

[Pig_Larkcape1]

Yeah, that's fine, Nola.

[Nola_Applequill1]

Yeah, that's fine, Nola.

Awesome! Thank you!

[Nola_Applequill1]

SFDP

Hehe. Cool. Is it okay if I make you a Xare? They're still technically bad guys.

@Pig_Larkcape1 - I have decided to make you a part of the Empire, if you don't mind. *snickers with perfect plot in mind with you and Peri * You...

Nola A.: Case Unsolved

We kept our speedboat moving, until we saw three troops advancing toward us.

"Uh..."

"Stop! Fugitives! You are not allowed to pass!" The Autofficer glared at me more than anyone else, which made me a bit self-conscious.

Suddenly, he knocked us out with tranquilizer guns and all I saw was black...

You're an Autofficer!

[Pig_Larkcape1]

You're an Autofficer!

Yay! Thanks.

[Nola_Applequill1]

Yay! Thanks.

You're welcome!

[Arrethtraen_Sprocketline]

Heyyyyy, Nola.

[Nola_Applequill1]

Nola A.: Case Unsolved

Chapter 17, Divine Intervention, is now published! Sorry I was late, guys. I had to fill out some things and email some peeps.

• That was AWESOME! I wasn't in it, but great job nonetheless.
• That was AWESOME! You did a great job representing my character.
• That was good, but I think you should have made my character a bit different. [Explain in reply below]
• You made my character good, but I don't really like that chapter much.
• I have a suggestion! [Explain in reply below]
• That was okay, but it could have been better.
• I don't like that one as much, sorry.

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People Who Were Mentioned in Chapter 17, Divine Intervention:

In order of appearance:

@Lightscape_Ironwalker - Prologue

@Gloria_Oldenpinner

@Scarlett_Darkhall

@Arrethtraen_Sprocketline - Mention

@Hanna_Brassheart - Mention

@Ariella_Newheart - Cameo

@Grace_Newgadget - Mention

@Jacoby_Elderfun1 - Mention

@Emily_Purplebottle - Mention

@Pig_Larkcape1 - Cameo

(Continued..._)