I just realized I never replied to this. My apologies!
The reason I voted that it could have been better was because these lines seemed a bit clunky. You see how you repeated "as if knowing something was coming/about to come"? You might have done this intentionally, but when I read it it sounded just a bit muddled. I think you might have also explained about Lightscape's "power" of knowing the future more clearly.
One smaller thing: I noticed that you spelled "torture" as "torcher" in one of the previous chapters.
Other than that, I think you're doing well with your story!