Nautilus' Roleplay Compilations Discussion Topic

[Eerie_Coppernight]

Hmmmmm, I suppose I should explain my reasoning behind some of this.

In short......

If you'd like to keep it this way, you will be removing one of the three interlacing plots in the Specter of the Theater roleplay.

I suppose it was revealing my hand too soon. I thank you for pointing that out.

Drake would never show such visible emotion, he's very composed, to the point of being motionless, almost as a statue.

The 'start' might be nothing more than a quick lifting of the head. It wouldn't have to be much at all. In fact, you may remove it entirely.

Ah, an @Erik_Deruin reference, very nice indeed.

I felt rather obliged to put it in. Someone so similar could not help but prompt recollections.

Ah, the wolf. Chuckles softly. You'll see soon enough.

I'm looking forward to it greatly, a sort of fox and hound situation.

The human oyster. Laughs at the nickname. Very nice.

You admit, then, that it is appropriate.

Did you write this yourself?

I parodied a song from Veggietales: Lord of the Beans. That film has some of the greatest Veggietales songs since Esther: The Girl Who Became Queen. I thought it might pertain to Drake's position in society and give him something to brood on.

Explain the last sentence, please. I suspect you've paralyzed Drake with Aether (which I find slightly rude, but that's beside the point), something I wouldn't think Nautilus would take too kindly to you doing in his absence, treating a guest in such a way.

I was hinting at certain security measures you put in the room to keep guests from poking about if left to their own devices. The measures in question, I shall leave to your fertile imagination.

I truly do owe you one,

Be so kind as to never mention it again.

[Nautilus_Lightblast]

My reply:

I suppose it was revealing my hand too soon. I thank you for pointing that out.

It's fine.

The 'start' might be nothing more than a quick lifting of the head. It wouldn't have to be much at all. In fact, you may remove it entirely.

I will do the latter.

I felt rather obliged to put it in. Someone so similar could not help but prompt recollections.

True. How I wish that I could have returned in Vytanni's time.

I'm looking forward to it greatly, a sort of fox and hound situation.

Chuckles.

You don't know how spot-on your use of the word "hound" really is.

You admit, then, that it is appropriate.

Somewhat, it's the humor that appeals to me.

I parodied a song from Veggietales: Lord of the Beans. That film has some of the greatest Veggietales songs since Esther: The Girl Who Became Queen. I thought it might pertain to Drake's position in society and give him something to brood on.

Ahhh, I see. That's the one Archibald sings at the dinner party near the beginning, correct? What was it called, "A Little Bit of This"?

I was hinting at certain security measures you put in the room to keep guests from poking about if left to their own devices. The measures in question, I shall leave to your fertile imagination.

Ah, that explains it. I suppose we'll leave those particular measures unspecified... for the time being, that is.

Be so kind as to never mention it again.

Duly noted.

Another detail: Would you mind if I changed the first-person details to third-person? The entirety of the Specter of the Theater roleplay, as far as I can recall, is third-person, and I would appreciate it if I didn't have to break that line of consistency.

This has successfully jump-started my creative drive.

I'll get to writing Drake as soon as I can.

[Eerie_Coppernight]

In conclusion,

Would you mind if I changed the first-person details to third-person? The entirety of the Specter of the Theater roleplay, as far as I can recall, is third-person, and I would appreciate it if I didn't have to break that line of consistency.

I only wrote it in first person because I was writing from my point of view. You would naturally write it from Drake's which will be a different perspective entire. I rather enjoy his inner monologue so I'm looking forward to his thoughts on what I say.

[Nautilus_Lightblast]

Alright, I was just double-checking, thank you.

[Nautilus_Lightblast]

Rebellion: Scarlet Soldiers

so...... can I be in this topic? as in, can I post on this topic?

@Miss_S11, that topic is an old roleplay of mine, compiled with many others into my roleplay compilations topic. If the category of a topic is labeled "Role-Play", please refrain from posting until you have asked in the proper discussion topic to be authorized to post.

Under normal circumstances, I would ask the mods to delete/move your post, but since that topic is due to be closed anyways, I'll let it slide this time.