The last episode was pretty good.
I didn't understand why Alex went crazy and waved his arms around (
) after exiting the game, and why the Aether boiler exploded (They aren't supposed to do that?
).
I thought it was interesting. The whole Tiny scene was funny, I had the same reaction as Silverclaw on that
The fact that the bully was so readily transformed into a "nice guy" is a little misleading when it comes to real life experiences.
Everything else I liked, and I hope the Aetherlight does more short stories in the future! 
(Wait, I just read the article. Did he use the Aether boiler to power up his suit??? If anyone has answers please tell me!)

The first and the last episodes were definitely my favorite, I love the mixing of game and life footage.