Edit Requesting

[Jacoby_Elderfun1]

Have you ever had a word in your role-play that you misspelled and wished you could edit? Now you can. The moderators will now be accepting requests for this such thing.

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This is howe it works...

1. Quote the post you want to edit and highlight which part you want to edit.

Anything About Draven Eldercraft (Free Role Play)

This is howe it works...

2. Highlight the correct word spelling below.
how

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That's it! Once a moderator sees your request, we will edit your post and delete the comment you have placed here so that we know that the request has been fulfilled.

I do ask that we start on editing RP's only. Once we have that under control we'll talk about doing other things.

Also, try to start on your own role-plays first. Putting other peoples RP's here before your own may be slightly offending to that person.

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Let the requests come in!

[Jacoby_Elderfun1]

All right, boys and girls.

We are going to revoke this:

I do ask that we start on editing RP's only.

We are now open for any edit requests on your posts. Keep in mind, this is a test. If it gets too overwhelming, we'll have to shut it down for a little bit.

So as of now, bring them in!

[Dino_Follyradish1]

The Great Escapes

DID YOU KNOW THAT JOHN ACTUALLY THINKS THAT THE GREAT ENGINEER IS THE TRUE **LEADER NOW?

Can you get rid of the 2 these things ** in that part?

The Great Escapes

[Dino_Follyradish1]

@Mr_R9 wants these three posts to be deleted.

I need help RIGHT NOW!

This is my last message i am deleting MR. CRANKDUST and creating a new soldier so CRANKDUST OUT.

I need help RIGHT NOW!

sorry i mean to say i am deleting my account.

I need help RIGHT NOW!

How do I delete the entire account? DINO FOLLYRADISH1?

[Mr_R9]

please specify.

[Dino_Follyradish1]

In the quote you see 2 of these things: * right after true, and they weren't supposed to be there.

[Beckendorf_Direscope]

Done

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[Dino_Follyradish1]

Great! I suppose since all of these have been done, these posts can be deleted too.

[Cody_Ironpiper]

Please change the name of this topic to

Imperial Views Discussion Topic

Imperial views (Free for all Role-Play) discussion topic

And change the first post to the following: (Please remember to bold what I have bolded.)

Welcome to Imperial Views, here we shall discuss future plans and other out-of-character things. First, however, I need to clarify some things:

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1. Try to keep your posts at a minimum of 300 words. I won't be counting, but I hope to remove the common "sentence post." This is to help you explain what's going on more either within your character or around them.

Which is more enjoyable to read?

"Hey," Cody said as he approached, but she didn't respond.

She was crying and looked up, "Awful!" Cody came up to her and sat in a puddle beside her.

Or:

"Hey, how's it been?" Cody said as he approached her. She didn't move and Cody slowed, wondering if something was wrong. She seemed to be crying, "Is everything alright?"

"No!" She exclaimed, "It's awful."

Cody moved closer to her and made to sit down, but there was no dry spot near her and he paused, he didn't want to get wet. But he cared more about her than he did himself, he sat anyway.

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1. If something is meant to be a secret, don't find out about it.

We often use dramatic irony, where the reader knows something that the character doesn't. Don't let that knowledge pass the boundary. (Depending on the circumstances, I may ask for the post to be deleted if this rule is broken, so as to not interfere with the story.)

Like, if one of us is a Resister, but also a traitor working for the Empire, it wouldn't be fun to just reveal him instantly, let him drop some clues. If you can back up your idea with evidence of why you believe so, there is no problem.

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1. Here I shall post a bio guide:
   Name:
   Titles: (What do people call you; nicknames, aliases and things of that nature.)
   Rank: (Imperial Characters only.)
   Gender:
   Age:
   Hair:
   Eye Color:
   Height:
   Weapons:
   Motivation: (Why does your character believe what he does? What caused him to do what he did?)
   Personality: (What's your character like? This can overlap with Motivation, this is helpful so other people can write your character.)
   Abilities:
   Back-story:
   Strengths:
   Weaknesses:
   Allies:
   Likes:
   Hates:
   Dislikes:
   Notes: (Include items here that you wouldn't include elsewhere such as Nervous reactions, accent, or other things of the sort.)
   Appearance-Imperial:
   (Physical description would go here)

[Beckendorf_Direscope]

Done

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[Cody_Ironpiper]

Thanks, a couple of changes. Can you fix my weird number points, I don't know how I missed it, but please change them to 1. 2. and 3. instead of all 1.'s. Also, can you capitalize the "views discussion topic" part of the name so that the grammar is correct, "Imperial Views Discussion Topic".

Thank you.

[Beckendorf_Direscope]

I changed the capitalization, but I don't know why the numbers are like that, the post edit shows them as 1, 2, 3, etc.

[Cody_Ironpiper]

Thanks for doing that. I really appreciate it.