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[Gloria_Oldenpinner]

Marvelous, dahling, marvelous!

[Ariella_Newheart]

After listening to Owl City songs on repeat (for inspiration), I can finally post....THIS!

Ariella's Quote Stories

I hope none of you mind me poking fun at your role-play characters (mine included). No offense is intended by these stories.

[Awesome_Lensfun1]

listening to Owl City songs on repeat (for inspiration),

Owl city songs on repeat. Hmm. Let me think.
I could do that. But for how long?

[Ariella_Newheart]

Here is Chapter 30! (Wow, 30 already?! )Please check it out and let me know what you thought of it. Thank you!

The Arbitrary Antics of Ariella Newheart

[Grace_Newgadget]

That was great....and awesome.....and just amazing!! Great job! Can’t wait to see what happens next!!

[Ariella_Newheart]

Chapter 31's posted! It features @Hans_Oddcraft, @Elsa_Overhurt (AKA @Emily_Purplebottle), Jefferson, and me. Please check it out and let me know what you thought of it, everyone!

The Arbitrary Antics of Ariella Newheart

[Iliara_Mustardtop]

It’s great! I love how you described the battle

[Nola_Applequill1]

AMAZING @Ariella_Newheart! Just simply amazing. I also agree with @Iliara_Mustardtop - I love how you described the battle! Very descriptive and I love the characters. Keep up the great work!

[Aislinn_Mollisong1]

I just love it when people do fight scenes, because I can't. So I read AWESOME stuff like this!

[Ariella_Newheart]

Here is Chapter 32: Victorious Threat.

The Arbitrary Antics of Ariella Newheart

What did you think of it?

• It was great!!!
• It was pretty good...
• It could have been better.
• I didn't like it.
• I haven't read it yet.

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[Nola_Applequill1]

Awesome job @Ariella_Newheart! Great writing skills!

[Grace_Newgadget]

Great job @Ariella_Newheart!! I loved it can’t wait for the next part!

[Ariella_Newheart]

That moment when you accidentally vote on your own poll.... facepalm

Anywho, thank you so much, @Nola_Applequill1! You too, @Grace_Newgadget! I can't wait for the next part, either.

I have so many plans. SO MANY.

MWAHAHAHAHAAA

[Ariella_Newheart]

I present to you, my readers, the apex of the Arbitrary Antics of Ariella Newheart. (At least for this section of the story.)

The Arbitrary Antics of Ariella Newheart

Check it out and let me know what you thought of it.

[Gloria_Oldenpinner]

Masterful! I love how you built the atmosphere during the dialogue!

[Cinnar_Ratchetloop]

The applause.

I love it! The detail is gooooood.
If I come in as an Autofficer but still working for the Resistance...

[Nola_Applequill1]

Check it out and let me know what you thought of it.

I love it @Ariella_Newheart! Great job. I have to agree with @Gloria_Oldenpinner - I very much enjoy the way you built the atmosphere: The fire, the Automaton, Fog... It was epic! I wish it was longer so I could have read more, hehe! Great work, Miss Ariella! Keep it up.

[Aislinn_Mollisong1]

You stealer...don't think I didn't catch that, Ari.

#IlyonChroniclesForever!

[Ariella_Newheart]

@Gloria_Oldenpinner @Nola_Applequill1 Thank you soooo much! One of my main goals in writing is to create a vivid atmosphere.

@Cinnar_Ratchetloop Heheh...I've actually written a few of the later chapters with you as a Resistance worker in No Man's Landing. It's coming up in a few weeks. Anywho, thank you!

@Aislinn_Mollisong1 What, the stuff about swearing allegiance to the Emperor? That might have been entirely unintentional. Or maybe the Ilyon Chronicles have affected my subconscious. (Yes, that makes total sense, 'cause all my best writing comes from my subconscious. )

[Aislinn_Mollisong1]

Ah. Well, I recognized it instantly as a reference, probably because it was so well-written. shrugs