Please don't take this wrong, but I must confess, sometimes your writing can slightly be boring. (Even though I haven't read many of your pieces yet.) But this:
It was so stinking awesome. My heart was beating and I held my breath when you were at the waterfall scene! It was so good! I loved it! Keep it up bro!
I've knuckled down and have been reading through this series and it's full of experienced writers! It's so intense. Keep it up!