@Etlo_Maxlance, sorry to bother you. I just wanted to say, you wrote this part well. It was fine in that respect. However, I didn't really appreciate how your portrayed my character exactly. You don't need to change it. I won't force you to do that since I knew what I was getting into by joining the gang, but I'd really appreciate it if you (when using my character) made him a little more according to how I really act. Maybe check some of my older posts? Thanks.
@Vytanni_Throttlenight, I am find with your "beef". (sorry, it's how I talk) It adds a little more to the story without completely changing who I am. Thanks for leaving room for me to write as well. I'll write soon.