This sketch is far better than the first drawing you did of me, in my personal opinion. The expression on my face, the way my shadow appears to be distorted with fog... it's simply magnificent. Then, there's the story behind the sketch. Not many artists can create such an in-depth drawing like this.
I tip my hat off to you, madame.
I think it looks perfect as-is. I had already pictured Nautilus with that sort of hair before, and it gives a refined yet messy look to it.