Awesome!!!! You have a real knack for description. I like your writing voice, especially in this POV.
This is my favorite part.
AAAAAAAGH PIP AMAZING!!!!!!
You are so good. SO VERY GOOD. Please write the next part soon PLLLLLLLEEEEEEEEEEAAAAAAAAAAZZZZZZZEEEEEE.
oh me lawds, that was beautiful
Yes! I totally echo what @Zoe_Amberedge said!
GAH!! you guys are SO very encouraging!!
@Nola_Applequill1 Thankee very much!! bows
@Ariella_Newheart Wow, thanks! A fair warning: Not all of my roleplays will be quite as good as this one.
@Aislinn_Mollisong1 Ohhh, Ace! tight hug Thank you so much! I'll see what I can do... glances coldly at enormous pile of schoolwork
@Zoe_Amberedge @Missy_Vonheart Thank you SO much!!!
Hmmm, I need y'alls opinion on the Installment Two of The Appleclock Saga. I don't think it was very good. The character development was too... sudden... SO! Feedback, writerly advice, praises, critiques, ANYTHING would be nice! And please be honest!
No, it was great! I feel like you did a great job describing her emotions without it being an info dump!
I just think there was too much feeling and not enough action...
I think it was a good way to introduce her, but that’s just my personal opinion.
Heya, Peri! I want to say that I personally like it when someone expresses his/her feelings for a little chunk of the story, not always just action.
Like Iliara (am I eligible to call you Elm? ) said,
Great work, @Peregrine_Appleclock!
@Peregrine_Appleclock I know it's a bit late, but I just read all of your backstory. It's so great!! And very interesting!! (not in the sarcastic way, mind you)!! sighs happily I can never get enough of everyone's role-plays...
The last chapter was AMAZING! I love how you made it @Peregrine_Appleclock!
Attention: INSTALLMENTS THREE AND FOUR ARE NOW UP.
Apologies for the wait! It took awhile for inspiration to kick in.
SFDP, but am I still in your drawing list? I'd love to be drawn (I can just imagine you drawing a little baby Nola ), but I think I remember you added me. Thanks!
Thank you so much!!
I don't remember you shooting me a request. But I'll be happy to draw you!
I asked to be in the group picture, and you said I couldn't, and then offered to draw me individually, and then I said yes, so...
Ohhh, that's right!! I forgot about that. All right, you're on the list!
No problem! I will also be working on yours ( sorry... ) for Beacon Design.
I love these new installments, @Peregrine_Appleclock!!!
JANNER!!!!!! Bless his soul...
It's...it's... THE SCARLET MAN!!! faints from the absolute awesomeness