Comments about Ilayne and Scarlett's Stories

[Scarlett_Darkhall]

Haha, thanks, @Vytanni_Throttlenight!! I might need to take a break too eventually... sometimes it just feels like I'm losing track of what's most important in life...

[Ilayne_Merespark]

Thank you so much @Vytanni_Throttlenight

Just listened to a radio broadcast from Rick Warren today and it was really good. It was talking about how life is really just a test, and God is seeing how you use your gifts. I feel like the Aetherlight forums was helping me stretch my gift a little with writing my role-play and all, and now I feel like he wants me to get serious with my gift

(BTW....both of your stories are still fantabulous! )

Thanks so much! Waiting for yours Vy... (@Scarlett_Darkhall literally tells me when somebody's story is out and that's the moment I get on )

[Scarlett_Darkhall]

Yep. I know you're starting to do other things now, @Vytanni_Throttlenight, but if it's possible, could you still write on your story? It was really good! (It's totally ok if you don't, I was just wondering. )

[Scarlett_Darkhall]

Hey everyone!
I would like to make this poll because I feel lately like my story is really boring. The thing is I'm not adding anyone in my story yet because it's my past, and I've been trying to add people in when I can, but right now, it's difficult. So please tell me honest feedback!

• ARE YOU KIDDING?! I LOVE IT!!
• Eh, sorta.. it's kinda boring
• It's good!
• No. It's bad, just stop.
• Other (name below)

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[Scarlett_Darkhall]

Hey y'all!

As summer ends and school gets ready to start back up for me, I just wanted to let you know that I won't be on here as often as I was. But it's not just because of school. Like my sister said, forums is kinda a distraction for me (not you guys, you're all amazing!!). But I just feel like I need to take a break. Kinda what @Vytanni_Throttlenight and @Ilayne_Merespark have done. I need to get some perspectives back into shape, including catching up with God. I hope you understand!

Don't worry, I'll get back on once in a while and post some of your drawings. Maybe write some more of my story (which I haven't really been consistent on anyway...) And of course, read all of your stories and play the game with you!

I love you all!!!

S.D.

[Ilayne_Merespark]

Hey guys! I'm finally back on for a little bit! I missed all of you so much!!

The last time I came on was 2 days ago, and I thought after that I wouldn't be coming back on for a while. But God gave me sudden inspiration to start writing my role-play again, so HERE I AM!! I'M BACK!!

Soooo, how'd everyone think of Account 15?

• YOU KIDDING? THAT WAS AWESOME!!!
• It was great!!
• It was okay.
• Eh...

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So, the reason I'm typing this is because I wanted to warn you that Account 16 may be a bit intense for young readers. 1, there is guns and blood involved. 2, my character gets a little violent (only when the fog gets the best of her). I just wanted to warn ya'll because some people might get offended. BUT I CAN ASSURE YOU THAT THERE IS NO KILLING AND NO GORY DETAILS. I write for the glory of God, but if something offends you or if you feel uncomfortable with something please tell me.

I LOVE YA'LL!!!

ILAYNE

[Ariella_Newheart]

OH MY GOODNESS!

AMAZING JOB!

The way you write is so compelling and intriguing! This account is one of the best ones yet! I can't wait for more!!!!!!!!!

Your Avid Reader,

Ariella Newheart

[Ilayne_Merespark]

Awww!! Thank you so much!! Before I post my stories I let my sister read them to see what she thinks. If her response is OMGOODNESS THAT WAS AWESOME then I post it. If not I rewrite it until she thinks its cool

That was random. Anway, THANKS!!

[Goku_Ironheart]

Sorry I took a little longer to reply here @Ilayne_Merespark I realized I hadn't read the last post by @Scarlett_Darkhall on her story! I AM SO ASHAMED!

Honestly, I find both your stories utterly captivating.

I really enjoy both of your writing styles not to mention the way the stories are within the same world and time but tell totally different stories while keeping an overarching narrative. The way you both have all the story elements moving forward makes it really great to read a new part.

I can't wait to see Scarlett's next part so I can fill in that gap in my mind between the two stories!
No pressure though, artists need to take their time and that is definitely what you two are, artists with beautiful words!

Keep it up, you are doing amazing work here!

[Ilayne_Merespark]

@Goku_Ironheart I feel so honored!!!!! You totally just made my day!!

I think I might actually cry... tissues!!! Quick!!!

[Scarlett_Darkhall]

@Goku_Ironheart AWW!! Me and Ilayne read this post together and we are both SOO honored!!! Thank you so much! I'm actually just about read to post the next part in my story, so you won't have to wait much longer!

Again, thanks so much!!

[Hanna_Brassheart]

I just read your latest account, @Scarlett_Darkhall, and you almost made me cry...

[Scarlett_Darkhall]

Haha, aw! I know, I was crying when I wrote it...

[Aislinn_Mollisong1]

EPIC EPIC EPIC EPIC EPIC!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Can I say it more? I LOVE YOU GUYS!!!!!!

[Grace_Newgadget]

That was awesome! It was so good both of your storys! I LOVED IT!!

[Ilayne_Merespark]

Thanks bunches @Aislinn_Mollisong1 @Grace_Newgadget!!

[Mikey_Keyburst1]

I read the first part, I like it!

[Grace_Newgadget]

Just read the newest episode and I loved it! I can't wait for more!

[Mikey_Keyburst1]

I read more of it and I love it!

[Mikey_Keyburst1]

I love it!more more!