Okay, great. In my hurry, I honestly wasn't paying much attention to my focal point. I had an idea that the bombardiers canon would lead you to the character, and the hammer handle and flames to the hammerhead, and the arc of the flames back to the bombardier. A little triangular cycle. I am glad to hear it kind of worked out.
Every human being can tell if something looks unnatural, even if they can't pin what it is exactly.
Really helpful feedback. I did not at all realize that the legs look like they are crossed. It is most likely due to the deep fold in the dress, and bad placing of the highest fold crossing her legs.
The fabric does look fuzzy, and even though the fabric probably is fuzzy, I wasn't trying to achieve that (also wasn't avoiding it). Nice! I'll remember this next time I want to produce fuzzy fabric.
I see that on the shoulder pelt, does it look that way to you anywhere else? The shoulder pelt was inked first, then the dress hem. I liked the way the latter turned out, as I can also see a bush on the shoulders.
Actually, it isn't Aislinn, it is myself. Just not my Aetherlight character. I have strung certain Inktober prompts into a little story, and the characters are Turi and myself.
Extremely!! Thank you very much.