Agent Lightspark: Revealed - Discussion Thread

[Sierra_Lightspark]

Oh, my!! Thank you so much!!

You are very welcome!

Well now I'll need to read it.

That would be much appreciated . . . Hehe . . .

[Jacoby_Elderfun1]

@Sierra_Lightspark
Yeah! Sorry.

cameos of other people

That is what I mean. You said you just wanted three people. Will they be your main characters? Will you add minor characters too?

[Sierra_Lightspark]

You said you just wanted three people. Will they be your main characters? Will you add minor characters too?

Yes and yes. @Iliara_Mustardtop, @Pig_Larkcape1 and @Emily_Purplebottle will be my main characters, @Peregrine_Appleclock and @Christopher_Puddlevest1 will be (prominent) side characters. I will make a poll for this.

• I would love to be a side character! Count me in.
• I may not read it, but I may want to be a side character.
• Nope!

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I will have 5-10 side/minor characters.

[Aislinn_Mollisong1]

The polls won't work for me, but I would love to be in your story!

[Sierra_Lightspark]

The polls won't work for me, but I would love to be in your story!

Because I closed them! I had only three main characters. You can be a side character, though! (Let me open up the loyalties thing again, now, actually.)

What side are you on, by the way? You can pick on the previous poll that I just opened.

[Sierra_Lightspark]

Hey @Christopher_Puddlevest1, I'm just about to make my first chapter (), and I'm going to submit it soon, but I need your character info. I thought I could find it on Role-Play Characters Search, but I guess you haven't submitted it yet. If you could give me your character information (looks, personality, traits, likes, dislikes, etc.) either on this discussion page or on the Role-Play Characters Search thread that I gave a link to earlier, that would be great! Thanks, Cap!

[Pig_Larkcape1]

I'm just about to make my first chapter

Wait, does that mean, you are about to post it, or does it mean, you are about to start writing it?

[Sierra_Lightspark]

Wait, does that mean, you are about to post it, or does it mean, you are about to start writing it?

I'm still working on it, but I'm almost about to post it. I have your character info, so I don't need that, in case you were wondering.

[Pig_Larkcape1]

No, I was just wondering what you meant, @Sierra_Lightspark.

[Sierra_Lightspark]

I was just wondering what you meant

I'm almost about to post it. Just making some minor changes.

[Sierra_Lightspark]

Agent Lightspark: Revealed

Chapter 1 is OUT! Haha, finally! (Don't worry, Nola A. is coming soon. )

What do y'all think?

• That was AWESOME! I wasn't in it, but great job nonetheless.
• That was AWESOME! You did a great job representing my character.
• That was good, but I think you should have made my character a bit different. [Explain in reply below]
• You made my character good, but I don't really like that chapter much.
• I have a suggestion! [Explain in reply below]
• That was okay, but it could have been better.
• I don't like that one as much, sorry.

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People Mentioned in Chapter 1:

In order of appearance:

@Christopher_Puddlevest1

@Pig_Larkcape1

@Emily_Purplebottle

@Iliara_Mustardtop

[Iliara_Mustardtop]

OOH, me likey! The way you wrote it sounds just like what I would do! I also love how clearly you describe things. I can really see it!

[Grace_Newgadget]

That was really cool!! Good job!!

[Peregrine_Appleclock]

Wow! @Nola_Applequill1/@Sierra_Lightspark You are such a good writer!!!!!! I love it!!

So how long until......

[Pig_Larkcape1]

I liked the way you made my character. Very interesting..
But, wait, who was Agent 16?

[Emily_Purplebottle]

That was amazing, @Sierra_Lightspark!

But, wait, who was Agent 16?

@Christopher_Puddlevest1, @Pig_Larkcape1.

[Pig_Larkcape1]

Actually, yeah, that makes sense, @Emily_Purplebottle. And...

WE ARE BOTH BAD GUYS!!! YAY!

[Emily_Purplebottle]

Yay! @Pig_Larkcape1.

[Sierra_Lightspark]

OOH, me likey!

Haha, thanks.

The way you wrote it sounds just like what I would do!

THAT IS ONE OF THE MOST EPICEST OF COMPLIMENTSEST

I also love how clearly you describe things. I can really see it!

THAT IS EVEN MORE EPICEST OF COMPLIMENTSEST THANKSEST YOUEST XD

That was really cool!! Good job!!

Thanks so much @Grace_Newgadget!

Wow! @Nola_Applequill1/@Sierra_Lightspark You are such a good writer!!!!!! I love it!!

Aww, thank you so much! If you are wanting a weekly/regular story, you can always read Nola A.: Case Unsolved.

So how long until......

XD Don't worry, you'll be in there soon enough . . .

But, wait, who was Agent 16?

Yup

@Christopher_Puddlevest1

WE ARE BOTH BAD GUYS!!! YAY!

Yay!

Haha! Yup!

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One thing. @Hanna_Brassheart - why did you edit the formatting out of the beginning part? It was kind of on purpose . . .

[Hanna_Brassheart]

It was on purpose? I'll change it back then. Some people might have a hard time seeing the words because of their devices, which is why I changed it.